Child In Silence

[Electrix]

Child in silence.
Child in dreams.
Nothing is real--
Nothing what it seems.

Child in mourning.
Child in grief.
Innocence stolen
By a trusted thief.

Child in torment.
Child in pain.
Joy lays murdered
Boy the son of Cain.

Child in anger.
Child in rage.
Strangling emotions
Setting life's stage.

Child in guilt.
Child in shame.
Hang your head low,
For you carry the blame.

Child in fear.
Child in dread.
Vigilantly awake
In your unsafe bed.

Child in want.
Child in need.
Soul so hungry,
But no one takes heed.

Child in hopelessness.
Child in despair.
Abandoned and helpless.
Who bothers to care?

[Tami]

In my opinion, Electrix, this is one of your best pieces yet. I see a huge improvement in style and punctuation as well. I am well impressed /smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':)' />

[Shydragonchic]

Good job, you've come a long way, keep it up /good.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='(Y)' />

[mobil1_oils]

Well done Electrix, i would not be surprised to see that in a book, very well written, and very well laid out.

[Electrix]

Thanks =) yeah i take heed of all the little tidbits of advice ada /blum.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':P' />

[Kobra]

Great poem.. I didn't realise there were such great poets here /coolthumb.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='(cool1)' />

[Vercz]

hehe..thats nice leccy /smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':)' /> well done

lol..of course there are kobra, then you get down to my dark depressing ones /angel_not.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='(not)' /> ..lol

[Tami]

Your poems are very good vercz, stop putting down your work /stare.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='(stare)' />

[Josh]

ooooo She told you!

[Kobra]

It looks like I'll be spending alot of time going through here then /shocking.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='(ack)' />