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I recently made a professional portfolio site.

[url=\"http://joeburton.50webs.com/\"]Click Here[/url]

Tell me what you guys think...
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Post by Vercz »

hm... first impressions are good, the header looks about 1px off to the right (maybe thats just me?)

i like the simplicity, but perhaps a different font? you said you wanted a professional site...

oh and on that note, please dont you the word \"teh\" on a professional site /blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' />

also the text saying \"[b]the[/b] content box\" may not be needed. people will know what it is

hope im not being too critical /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />
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Post by Sylo-X- »

Your not...I love the ideas...But i cannt be too professional...its just not my nature O=)
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Post by to@ds »

Yeah, more of the same. If you going to make a "profesional" site, the word "teh" has no place(Is there really a place for leet speech ever?). You said you can not be to profesional, which isnt really a good trait, especialy if you were hoping to use your site to drum up business. If people dont know what "teh" is, they are just going to think you cant spell (and yes I know mine is pretty bad).

In your background section you didnt make it so we could full screen any of your backgrounds and admire them in full view, and some of them looked pretty cool! Same goes for your banners, sigs and web templates.

Id also agree on the text too, just dosent seem to fit right. Maybe try something abit more stylish, slightly more clean looking. Id also addvise bringing more colour into your page, what colour, Im not sure, maybe red if you can get it in. You could also think about creating a kind of logo, or do abit more work on the top banner of the site to make it abit more interesting, it all seems to wash into each other.

Not a bad effort though man, keep at it /bigwink.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\';)\' /> Put some more work into it and you'll have a portfolio site to be proud of /bigwink.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\';)\' />
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Post by Sylo-X- »

Yeah i know you cannt full view anything yet. Its still a work in progress. Thanks for the comments though. Ill see what i can do
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Post by Gadget »

Much the same as Tami and To@ds, and the header is slightly offline.
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ahem. vercz. not tami. kthxbye /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />
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Ooops, sorry m8.
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Post by Sylo-X- »

Alright. Ive totally redesigned the website. I havnt put it up yet but i have a jpeg of it [attachment=2300:attachment]
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Post by Gadget »

Pretty nice, but you spelt site wrong in the bottom right.
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Post by Sylo-X- »

AWW SON OF A...femail dog... Tis okay. i really didnt like the layout anyways...i think im going to go for something more technical.
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Cool.
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Post by Sylo-X- »

Okay I made a new design using some of the comments you guys gave. Tell me what you think.

[url=\"http://joeburton.kjbets.com/\"]http://joeburton.kjbets.com/[/url]
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Post by Vercz »

now that, i like. /biggrin.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':D\' /> its simple, its elegant... it gets the point across.. i cant think of any criticisms /biggrin.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':D\' />
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Post by Sylo-X- »

Thank you! =) The only problem im having with my new template is a php comment system for my blog. I have one set up but for some reason when i go to log in it wont accept the logon information i gave when its the same information i put in the config.php that i used...weird
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Post by Tami »

very nice, sylo; clean and professional looking. Well done /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />
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Post by Sylo-X- »

why thank you =D
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Post by R4PTOR »

Only thing I don't like is the top banner, not that there is anything wrong with it. That's just personal taste. Everything else is really good.
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Post by Marko »

Don\'t get me wrong I like the website, however to me it doesn\'t say professional.
Just my 2c.
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Post by Sylo-X- »

Okay i did another design. I like this one alot better then my last once. I incorporated some color into this one. and some different images. tell me what you think about this one.(i know these are getting boring)

[url=\"http://joeburton.kjbets.com/\"]http://joeburton.kjbets.com/[/url]
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Post by Marko »

I think that one\'s the best so far. Nice, simple, clean /good.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(Y)\' />
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Post by R4PTOR »

I like this one alot more, however the choice of text is quite poor in my oppinion. That's the only thing I don't like, the rest is really good. Best one so far. /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />
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Post by Sylo-X- »

hehe yall probobly thought i was done with this eh? well you were all wrong. Heres my latest design. [attachment=2388:attachment]
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Post by Marko »

cannot load because image contains errors? any on else or just me?
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Post by Tibs »

I got the same error ...
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Post by Josh »

You uploaded a corrupt image! /ohmy.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':o\' />
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Post by Gadget »

/handbags.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(bags)\' /> fwahahahahaha.

And i got the same errors /ohmy.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':o\' />
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Post by Sylo-X- »

well this is akward...hmmm

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found the problem, Forgot to make it RGB color for some reason.... anyways to save room heres a link to the .png

[url=\"http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/lost__wishes/joesite.png\"]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v634/los...hes/joesite.png[/url]

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Looks good, allthough I would\'t put those thingies next to theJoe Burton banner. Just leave it with the snowwy landscpae /spoton.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\'(Y1)\' />
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those thingies is the navigation /blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' />
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Post by Sylo-X- »

Okay heres another update. I put a little more thought into design and coding and all my other templates and i came up with this one. Once i get all the bugs worked out with the design i play to code it with a little CSS and PHP. Tell me what you guys think about this one [attachment=2398:attachment]
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Post by Gadget »

Its pretty cool. i dont really like the ".:" after the links, and i think you should lose the scanlines on the header.

But all in all a pretty nice site
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Alright, Dropped the scan lines, Also dropped the ".:" after the links on the navigation and fixed the 1px difference between the two content boxes. [attachment=2399:attachment]
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yeah it looks alot cleaner and better now /biggrin.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':D\' />
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Post by Sylo-X- »

Okay. Ive finally ditched IFrames!!!!!! And now ive done some coding with tables...scence i learned how to use them the right way. My next step will be CSS to make my pages a little nicer. But yeah. Its coded in pure HTML.

[url=\"http://joeburton.kjbets.com\"]http://joeburton.kjbets.com[/url]
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Post by Marko »

Nice work, I like the idea, but I think that there might be a tad too much red /blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' /> anyway, yeh nice work.
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