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ok now i have that out of the way, background info first. JetBlackHeartache is a local group from the area i live in, im really good mates with all the members, so i thought i would put dreamweaver where my mouth was..and make a website for them. in support, so they could possibly be seen as a more professional band, giving them more opporunities for gigs (concerts /blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' />) ..so uhh, without further adue.. here be it

[url=\"http://vercz.killagraphix.com/jbh/index.php\"]http://vercz.killagraphix.com/jbh/index.php[/url]


its only the images with the mature content warning on them, the index page is fine.. /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />

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noice work <3

looks good verczeh...

except.... (just examples of how the wording could be changed if you want to)

[quote]JetBlack Heartache is a new band onto the scene, just looking for a bit of publicity.[/quote]

JetBlack Heartache is a new band on the >city< music scene; welcome to their new website.

[quote]In recent weeks, the addition of Stuart has seen JetBlack Heartache finally be able to perform as a complete and polished act...[/quote]

Enter Stuart, bass guitarist. Now that the band was complete, JBH could concentrate on further polishing their music and their show. Guitarists Jason and David blend their guitar styles to give the band an impressive top end; by sharing the duties of lead and rhythm guitar parts they each get the chance to show off their talents. Drummer Matt holds them all to the beat and uncomparable vocalist Ashley finishes off JBH\'s front end with his wide range of singing talent.

Thank you for visiting our new home on the web; we will be making additions to the site - including some JBH music for you to listen to. See you again soon!

[quote]Formed sometime last year,[/quote] << put the year

They need better photos; while candid shots are good, they should be quality shots.

[color=\"green\"]oh, i didnt write up the whole thing. but it does fit in with the band /blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' /> ..as do the photos /bigwink.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\';)\' /> (if you know them) ..they have a gig next saturday, so ill put some photos up from that aswell..and i was playing with some designs on paper for an intro page aswell..nothing solid yet though.

thanks for the input, ill put it to the band if they want proper wording /blum.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':P\' /> [/color]

Like I said in msgr, the layout looks great - it appears to fit the band nicely.

Point taken, vercz...I was writing that from the viewpoint of a former talent publicist for an agency; perhaps a blending of personality and professionalism can be found for their site content because while the site is all about them, they want to also give the impression to people interested in booking them the appearance of professional, serious musicians. /smile.gif\' class=\'bbc_emoticon\' alt=\':)\' />