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Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 8:17 pm
by Electrix
Did you ever feel fear, or did you just think you had?
Did you ever deserve it, did you do something bad?
Did you ever miss something that you never had?
Did you ever convince yourself you were mad?
Did your heart ever hurt so much it stopped beating?
Did you wish it would burst and never stop bleeding?
Did you ever feel pain so strong you went numb?
Did you ever call a name in hope they would come?
Did you ever love someone without hearing their voice?
Did you ever even think you had a choice?
Did your heart ever hurt so much it stopped beating?
Did you wish it burst and never stop bleeding.
; Copyrighted '04'
; Insert My Real Name Here
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 9:25 pm
by Vercz
just lubbly /smile.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':)' />
ohh and me says "yes to all the above" /bigwink.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=';)' />
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 9:27 pm
by Electrix
they were rhetorical questions /dry.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='<_<' />
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 9:28 pm
by Vercz
point?? /Sugar.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='(sugar)' />
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 10:35 pm
by Electrix
nothing at all ;p
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 10:44 pm
by Vercz
there better not be /stare.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='(stare)' /> *munch*
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Mon Sep 27, 2004 11:01 pm
by Electrix
meh. *posts more of his writing*
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 8:56 am
by Tami
Ironic, Electrix...I have a piece which also has "did you ever" lines which I wrote a few years ago. I think as writers we ask alot of questions /blum.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt=':P' /> always a good thing.
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 3:59 pm
by Vercz
*point in general direction of latest poem "boy"* ...theres a fair amount of questions in there too /happy.gif' class='bbc_emoticon' alt='^_^' />
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 4:06 pm
by Electrix
maybe we ask too many questions? ;s
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 4:18 pm
by Tami
or maybe we're searching for answers and just don't know which questions to ask?
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 6:19 pm
by Electrix
either one, life sucks.
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 8:20 pm
by Vercz
maybe we ask the right amount of questions...maybe everyone else doesnt ask enough??
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:04 pm
by Tami
good point, vercz; so who's the neurotic ones...them or us?
Never Stop Bleeding
Posted: Tue Sep 28, 2004 9:21 pm
by Electrix
*hides from the ebil question*